Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 423,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Enemies Attack - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Enemies attack
So much is at stake
Mother land is bleeding

Soldiers rush
Enemies are flushed
Heaps of dead rushed

Whose son or whose father?
Someone's near and dear
Agony and pain in life to bear


Comments about Enemies Attack by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2012 5:21:00 AM)


    Just bring them home

    If I take all you have.
    And sell the country so vast
    You will never stand fast.
    As long as your broke you will do as we say.
    And in my bank your monies shall lay.
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    Excellent Poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2012 5:21:00 AM)


    Asim Nehal32 minutes ago
    I like it....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2012 4:37:00 AM)


    Great poem


    Pamela KambicLess than a minute ago
    My son was in the Marines so this poem I have felt
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2012 4:28:00 AM)


    Enemies attack
    So much is at stake
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 23, 2012


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