Enforced With A Focus Fixed Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Enforced With A Focus Fixed



Being alone and wishing to be,
With an acknowledgement of it.
I chose to experience removing myself from limits.
And with the doing of this helped me to realize,
I depended on the feeding of my weaknesses.

And when I faced this doing to prove I could do...
With a self examination to improve,
I became enforced with a focus fixed upon it.
I had to divorce from my emotions then too sensitive.
And with a taking I did...
I took the oars to row my floating boat back to shore,
To never again ignore those obstacles.

Being alone and wishing to be,
With an acknowledgement of it.
I chose to experience...
Distance!
And I became enforced with a focus fixed.

Divorced from my emotions then too sensitive,
I became enforced with a focus fixed.
With a focus fixed.
And with a focus fixed...
I divorced from my emotions,
Then too sensitive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 05 August 2012

Point taken, understood and respected, yet keep in mind, Lawrence that sometimes a persons pour of sensitivity becomes their strength, passion and impetus in taking bulls by horns on issues that may in fact not be solely about that individual, but for all those around them and who share in the same arena, instead of hoping someone else goes bull-hunting....Fine penning, as always, in your usual smooth rhetorically emphatic style ~FjR~

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