Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 58,920 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Lawrence S. Pertillar Poems

1. Trail Of Failure -new- 8/16/2018
2. Aretha! -new- 8/16/2018
3. Until One Is Reminded -new- 8/17/2018
4. Embellished Skills 3/23/2015
5. Incoming Insults (Signs Kept Swept Away) 3/24/2015
6. Interest 3/24/2015
7. True Faces 3/25/2015
8. Excessive Esoterics 3/25/2015
9. Sledgehammer 3/18/2015
10. Smitten 3/18/2015
11. Parenting Is A Commitment 3/19/2015
12. Misdeeds To Disbelieve 3/20/2015
13. Headaches To Tolerate Patiently 3/20/2015
14. My Endeavors To Pleasure 3/20/2015
15. Melodies To Sing 3/21/2015
16. Remaining At The Dock 3/21/2015
17. When One Leaves Love 1/15/2015
18. Generalities 1/15/2015
19. With A Pride And Interest Given 1/15/2015
20. Who Gets Paid What 1/16/2015
21. These Are The Standards 1/16/2015
22. Objecting Yet Expecting 1/17/2015
23. Real And Honest 1/17/2015
24. Where Does One Go 1/18/2015
25. Pride To Hype And Delusions To Keep 1/18/2015
26. Challenge And Intrigue 1/19/2015
27. Those Thoughtless Are Impossible 1/19/2015
28. Peaceful Dispositions 1/19/2015
29. Sitting To Reminsce Their Victories 1/19/2015
30. With Faith Unshakened 1/20/2015
31. Reasons To Discuss 1/20/2015
32. When Laughter Done By Others End 1/20/2015
33. When Greed Decreases And Greasy Fingers Dry 1/20/2015
34. Come Prepared 1/20/2015
35. On A Feeding Of Wickedness 1/21/2015
36. Giving It Attention 1/24/2015
37. Have Fun! Why Not? 1/25/2015
38. Unchanging To Exchange Blame 1/25/2015
39. A Hero But Not To Claim 1/25/2015
40. Irreverently Relevant 1/26/2015

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Tan Pratonix Tan Pratonix (10/25/2017 1:17:00 AM)

    I can say Lawrence is a good man. He encourages good poets. Hope he shoots down the bad ones. He writes very well. Great command of the English language (sadly murdered by the Ninjuns today on PH) . Lots of wit and wisdom in his poetry. I hope his poems have been published.17,874 poems is staggering! Lawrence, are you a poem-machine? ? ? ?

    I truly hope you've reached success on the Poetry Front. I couldn't find you on FB. But you must be somewhere. Keep up the good work!

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  • Marco Antonio Solano Marco Antonio Solano (6/5/2015 6:46:00 PM)

    I've read a few of your poems selected at random, and I find them to be powerful, yet very well thought out. But over all, what impresess me the most, is your consistency and dedication. It is a pleasure reading your works. Greetings

  • Elliott Rosenberg Elliott Rosenberg (5/15/2015 1:30:00 PM)

    Hi lawrence. Your words are moving. They take semantics to exponential contexture.. Your poem Baffled is just. Please feel free to shed light on my poem Baffled as well. Nowvwe are two pioneers baffling esoteric linguistics..
    With kindness elliott rosenberg

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Dear Lawrence
    your works are as fresh as a spring breeze...that will awake the humanity
    comme une lumière dans l'obscurité

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Jack Growden Jack Growden (7/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry Lawrence! Please take the time to read my collection, I am a young poet and keen to learn. Jack Growden

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

  • Rachel Dowd Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

  • Justin Reamer Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

Choosing To Walk On The Right Path

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Is going to have its obstacles.
Temptations will be there to tease,
With attempts to weaken.
And faces familiar...
Will appear to critique.

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Isn't an easy decision one makes.
It takes one to break away,
From barriers attached...
That are difficult to unlatch.
Yet...
Can be done to escape those traps.

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Is going to have its obstacles.
And some days will seem impossible.
But that path chosen,
By the one who knows it is ...

Read the full of Choosing To Walk On The Right Path

Zapped

When a mind is shut...
Don't try to pry it open.
It is better where it is decaying,
Left alone.
Leave it!
There is hope with others showing
Signs of response.
Those who are replusive...
Are already dead anyway!

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