English Haiku Poem by ray Schreiber

English Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Gone
haiku's
form
format
and finite
fittings
Left
the rites
of summer
spring winter fall
structureless
one breath
blows
past my
ear

Wednesday, October 21, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Butler 08 November 2009

'Structureless one breath blows' Rachel Ann Butler

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 November 2009

Excellent! Inventive and brilliant. Very much I like it.

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Lillian Thomas 30 October 2009

clever, my friend, very very good for your first Waltz Wave, esp. Looking forward to what you can do with this form!

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ray Schreiber

ray Schreiber

Mechanicsburg, Pennsylvania USA
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