Enjoy And Share Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Enjoy And Share

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I enjoy and share
As I have place to go no where
I am love hungry
And thirsty

I look at leaves
And feel relieved
How nature has gifted them with color
Green is replica of happy and ever green

I wish the smile always
Bear no grudge and love happiness
There lies universal message
Live with present age

There is room for no pain
That may always remain
Either in form of human tragedy
Or curse to be inflicted from treachery

Never let any one out
Touch not evils or talk about
Win over with sympathy
This is direction from almighty

Human or inhuman
We are man an woman
Single entity is to be loved
Disgrace or grace is to be believed

You won’t find any trace
When you loose earth’s surface
You must have mental truce
Never leave the ends loose

Color life the way you like
But never hurt someone with strike
It is considered as disgraceful act
As we have no right to react

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

RAJ NANDY This poem, & specially the last stanza, is applicable to some of our New & Young writes posting these days! Hope they read and take in the Lesson! Thanks, -Raj, New Delhi.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

wise discourse............... PARTHA SARATHI PAUL13 minutes ago words for deep consideration..............thanks, sir. Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

nikki macke14 minutes ago keep writing Comment +1 A bit scary for me, rigid thinking.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

Kim Solez12 minutes ago I sense a sort of rigidity of thinking here which is for me quite uncomfortable, as are the references to violence. I want to cry out against this in the poem even though it is confusingly expressed.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 September 2013

I enjoy and share As I have place to go no where

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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