Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 414,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Enjoy Life - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You may deny
But we know the guy
Your loved him as only one and hero
In fact he may have long nose like sparrow

But you have liked
You can't say now you disliked
For the fear of bad opinion
He is best as your companion

You can still search
Find him easily and reach
To know something as how to see
Each other under the shade of tree

This is tender age
One prefers to write on page
Tries to come out of cage
With wings to fly and manage

So you say it is secret affair
But it is not fair
It has become known
There is no use to frown

You are seen moving in arms
That does no damage or harm
You are liked by him and appreciated
He is for you now and closely related

Enjoy the life
Dream about becoming wife
Life shall take you to beautiful end
You just be normal and try to be friend


Comments about Enjoy Life by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/19/2012 7:02:00 AM)


    Shawnna Johnson5 minutes ago
    I think that it should be shortened cause it looses your attention in the middle.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/19/2012 7:01:00 AM)


    very interesting


    Dominic George13 minutes ago
    Trust and love
    Regret and betray
    How shall we cope?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/19/2012 7:00:00 AM)


    Well written


    Monica Harley8 minutes ago
    I like it. It is well
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/19/2012 6:15:00 AM)


    You may deny
    But we know the guy
    Your loved him as only one and hero
    In fact he may have long nose like sparrow

    You just be normal and try to be friend
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 19, 2012



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