hear the music love the beat
running outside to dance in the streets
see the birds chirping there?
going outside to get fresh air
breaking the silence talking real loud
getting a 'A' on th test
your parents are proud
im done with this poem so goodbye for now.
I like the rhythm. So pleasing to the ear. Feedback: try not to end your writing pieces with 'I have to leave' or something like that. I learned that from experience so I am not criticizing you in the least. I've dont it before. I like your work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this poem :) C.G.