Break Free Poem by Amber AandB

Break Free

Rating: 5.0

why did you leave me?
why couldn't you stay?
what did i do wrong?
why won't you say?
was it my fault?
what did i do?
can i fix it?
can you?

Poet Of The River 26 August 2011

Good job, i like the way the poem gets smaller towards the end. Nice.

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i love your poem its rlly good i love it keep up the good work

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Elizabeth Grace 08 August 2011

Wow. I don't even have words...but this speaks to me, helps me more than you could know. I guess these are questions I didn't want to ask myself with what I am going through, but thank you for giving me somewhere to start. I will be keeping up with your writing!

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Romeo Della Valle 08 August 2011

Poignant questions that only time will answer! Actions speak louder than words as the saying! When the time comes for me to have to ask Why? I then realize that it is time for me to move on with my life and meet somebody else who I won't have to ask that question. You have a long way to go and plenty to prove to the World and you already started with this short write which has become your stepping stone into the Poetry World! Welcome dear Amber! 10+++ Keep inspiring the world with your talented writes! God Bless You for always! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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