Equals Poem by Jessica Caswell

Equals

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how can we treat each other this way
forever shall we live
in peace or war
some belive in the impossible
then again
some don't
but they stay positive
with their heads held high
we are all equals
every bit of man kind
but still people wonder
how can we treat eachother
like we're worthless
and nobody wants us
nobody cares
or even thinks about
giving someone spare change
or donating money to the unhealthy
or even making time to say hello
to passerbys
some belive in karma
I know I do
so if you do something good
it will come back to you
it may be in five minutes
or even a year
everyone is an equal
so we should not be treated like
we're invisible

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akram Saqib 17 May 2009

yes every body is equal in this world of fame and fortune but man has divided himself into many caategories

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 17 May 2009

I am 100% with you here, this has been the windmill I am fighting against for years - there is nothing more hurtful by being treated as invisible - even a smile would warm an empty stomach.

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Jazz Annis 17 May 2009

that is a good poem you are expressing your self on how you feel in life and i like that in poems...expressing your true deep feelings in the words you write down...

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Nice poem but I agree with George that some people are equal and some are even more qualer than others.

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George F. Hunter 17 May 2009

Good poem. It's too bad but in this world it seems that some end up being equaler than others.

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Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

you are very visible, alive and living indeeed..your words speaks a lot...as long as you r lining in the site...we ll always visit you...great poem Sweet 10++

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Smiley Hooker 17 May 2009

although some egoistic chauvinists do really exist, people must remain equal to one another just as God wanted us to be. great poem my dear!

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Christopher Lee 17 May 2009

essence of Bhagavad Gita has been given in a simple but great poem Jessica all the best

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