Erosion Comments

Great poetic and human feel in 3 very heartfelt and graphic verses that imply so very much! Good job

This poem is tempting BUT couldn't you have spared time and effort to expand it? ha! Welcome, 'New Poet', to PH, with its pros and cons for all, and it's STILL FREE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Yay! ! bri ;)

You could also be describing a person's body or life. I see no PH bio. : ( I read the first several line of each of your poems, and they all were tempting me to read.

Nostalgia humanizad and at its best!