Escape Poem by Adam Iron Thorn
Escape
Overwhelming thoughts,
Heart in distraught.
Cold-blooded tranquility,
Starving me of my abilities.
Flee from the pain,
Escape from the insanity,
Killing my worst enemy,
Putting myself into eternity.
hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx, Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..
hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx, Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..
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4/23/2024 4:02:01 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well, I enjoyed the whole poem, including the final two lines. This is a beautiful piece of work, short and to the core, I like that.