Adam Iron Thorn

Escape

Overwhelming thoughts,
Heart in distraught.
Cold-blooded tranquility,
Starving me of my abilities.
Flee from the pain,
Escape from the insanity,
Killing my worst enemy,
Putting myself into eternity.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 11, 2011

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  • Stefanie Fontker (9/11/2011 9:25:00 AM)

    Well, I enjoyed the whole poem, including the final two lines. This is a beautiful piece of work, short and to the core, I like that.

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  • Shyam Balaji (9/11/2011 8:53:00 AM)

    hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx,
    Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..

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  • Shyam Balaji (9/11/2011 8:49:00 AM)

    hey.....wel.! an wonderful expression of feelings.....poem is sad..! but last two lines were pathetic, ...eternity is not the ultimate answer for dis...and i dunno who the enemy is..anyways sad moments make u a gr8 poet....keep writing....thanx,
    Shyam (pls read and comment on ma poems and help me improve, Tc :)) ..

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