Sitting here in solitude
Alone inside my mind
I need a bit of altitude
Need to feel that high
Escape from all reality
If only for some time
Leaving this normality
For a place sublime
Minimally exquisite. This is the language which lifts poetry to a place of elevation. Just one tiny polish please. Because it has such a fine tone, this line needs attention. I need a BIT OF altitude. I need a LITTLE altitude takes it up one more level.
Great poem, I identify with it one hundred percent! My feelings exactly. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Short, but very well expressed - the need to escape from the realities of this world.