Monday, February 10, 2014

Eternal Comments

Rating: 4.8

I draw their spirits close to me and breathe,
and still I find, there's something to believe.
I need their energies to make me strong.
I hear the subtle echoes: Samhain's song.
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Paula M. Puddephatt
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Jonathan Carter 10 February 2014

This tells a great story in my mind. Great piece.

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Bill Cantrell 10 February 2014

Very nice indeed! Lines 4-7 reminds me of a poem I wrote- Poetic Diaglott. I really enjoyed reading this

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