Eternal Love Poem by Gautami Phookan

Eternal Love

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Equipped with feathers, in the wind it flows
Ascends, comes down and flourishes on blue;
above the sea, beyond the dark and deep,
my love extends and balances, on wings....

For you it stands above horizon's edge,
an arrow swift and lodged on pining breast;
unspoken words that hang on fluttered breath
as you return, sweet blossoms on my lips.

You speak of ageless love, endeared in dreams
against the stills of frozen, winter grey,
joined, drifting mates eternity shall bring,
hence both our aching souls shall be redeemed....

With tenderness I hold you in my eyes,
(ethereal spirit born in arbor green) :
I fear to touch my love's angelic bloom,
it tears my fleeting heart to hear its cry.



(Written with Giorgio Venetopoulos)

Monday, April 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Skarpathiotaki 18 January 2018

great! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1

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Georgios Venetopoulos 07 May 2014

I still feel honored for having collaborated with you. The blank verse poem is beautiful. Thank you for it. :) G.

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Ebi Robert 28 April 2014

that it is written by two is enough to show its quality...good write.

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