Eternal Love

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Immortal love we always need,
Less than that becomes a weed,
Oh, great love, you often feed,
Very young lovers and then lead,
Eternal happiness with a little seed,
Obstinate to carry out a great deed,
Baby you know my love is great,
Love can make us one and create,
Youth that will never die or fade,
Youth that doesn't grudge or hate,
Old age never affects our souls,
Under our flesh, great love recalls,
Better days we lived and still enjoy,
An easy life with our little boy,
But deep inside our love increases,
You know love fights all diseases.

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Blue Eyes 16 August 2008

waw, i gush i love this poem.it is probably the most beautiful poem u have ever writen and i`ve ever heard. what can i say, i am speechless. first of all, god may bless ur son and keep u all healthy.i love the idea of immortality of love. it immetates the shakespearian point of view about love.love is not love that alters when its alteration comes..

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