Eternity Poem by James Atkins

Eternity

Rating: 4.5


The fires of the sun will die,
draining heaven's light.
Stars will stretch across the sky,
in cold eternal night.

When ash is all that's left of man,
and the world is stripped of life,
If time lays waste to all our plans-

You'll always be my wife

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shannon Wright 18 January 2008

James- I am going to find the person who gave this an 8 and beat them up. Its a ten to me, i love it. -shannon

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Ernestine Northover 19 October 2005

The end brings me back down to earth, James, a lovely poem. Sincerely Ernestine Northover

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