Thursday, August 9, 2007

Eternity's Home... Sonnet Comments

Rating: 5.0

What price to welcome Eternity home...
What price has our sun paid for it's rising,
Shining, on Forever...faraway lands...
Squealing, laughing, children playing in sands
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COMMENTS
Sandra Fowler 20 August 2007

Very poignant. You have achieved excellence in both form and content. Lovely work, Elysabeth. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Original Unknown Girl 14 August 2007

This is absolutely adorable, the subject matter makes it so much lighter but you've woven in some pretty meaty stuff here, making us realise just what life's about. Love it Elysabeth, going to add it to my favs.... HG: -) xx

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Alison Cassidy 09 August 2007

Somehow the sonnet form seems perfect for this important reminder about the awful consequences of global warming and the responsibility we all share to cherish this wonderful planet and the sun that, because of our stupidity and misguided consumerism must ultimately destroy the next generation of children who play and sing in its warmth. A powerful piece, written with a poet's concern and wonder. love, Allie xxxx

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Marci Made 09 August 2007

Absolutely marvelous....and of course I love the way you've managed to get children in the mix.....Your mind runs so deep lizbeth...truly you are gifted..~~~marci. :) x~~~

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David Harris 09 August 2007

Elysabeth, An interesting way to say conserve our lands for eternity for our generations to follow. Beautiful poem my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. David

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