Wednesday, May 6, 2009
Eve Of Celebration Comments
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Lights were on by the middle of the sky
Everyone blinked their eyes to the sky
The clouds came running and a 'THUD'
They beated their drums, to start it all.
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Subroto Chatterjee
06 May 2009
Very imaginative and musical...But keep a check on the spellings. its distracting! Write on. Cheers. Subroto
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2/21/2026 8:30:24 AM # 1.0.0
This poem is a pathetic fallacy. I love the way u refer to the cloud, lightening, thunder and then the rain. It depicts an example of a typical rural setting. And a theme of love, togetherness and oneness. This is one of the best poems i have had the pleasure of reading. I enjoyed every bit of it. I could feel the mood, tone and passion u put into this. Thanks for sharing.