Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 383,587 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Even Dare - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Even dare

I have moved around
But never found
Love of my choice
That nicely promised

I have sunk in eyes
With earnest try
But failed to notice warmth
In each count of breathe

There may be push and pull
From heart to become successful
But love is no commodity
That is purchased and sold openly

I shall go along
Even if they are wrong
But show me will power
To flow with me like river

I am not hesitant
To show them at present
That I shall care
And even dare

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 8:22:00 AM)


    Be dare! Drive out them away! Thank you for sharing.
    6 hours ago by BIPIN CH RABHA to Even dare
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 8:22:00 AM)


    Care and dare, good poet! Love will find you.
    6 hours ago by Jimmy Yetts to Even dare
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Be dare! Drive out them away! Thank you for sharing.
    34 minutes ago by BIPIN CH RABHA | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 2:15:00 AM)


    Jimmy Yetts
    xCare and dare, good poet! Love will find you.
    21 minutes ago by Jimmy Yetts | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/18/2015 1:30:00 AM)


    I am not hesitant
    To show them at present
    That I shall care
    And even dare
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 18, 2015



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