Even Though Poem by Aivilo Gnuoy

Even Though



Even though we're slowly drifting apart,
Even though it feels like a poison dart,
I'll never forget, The way we met,
When we fell, Into life's net.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 January 2013

again i have a question about your use of capital letters: why the capitals at The and Into? no big deal; i'm just curious. of course i've gotten into the habit of not capitalizing at starts of my prose sentences and at some other traditionally-capitalized locations, which could be a problem for some people. i hope my readers forgive me. i blame/credit an old friend with teaching me to do that in emails a few years ago! bri i have one more of your poems to read. i hope you are still visiting P.H. (if you want to; maybe you've moved on) . any new poems to share? ? feel free to send them to me.

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