Life Poem by Aivilo Gnuoy

Life



Life is like a never-ending dream,
At times it starts to burst at the seam,
Sometimes a nightmare, sometimes wonderful,
When it ends you'll be quite peaceful.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Again, not suicidal. Just they way I look at things.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 January 2013

glad to hear it is not suicidal. i DO belileve suicide is a valid choice for some people, including perhaps me some day, BUT i do strongly believe that many people considering suicide can recover from the thought and have ok, at-least-somewhat-productive lives if they give themselves the chance. i like the comparison of life to a dream, though i feel dreams may not always leave a person peaceful as i hope death does. this is the second of your poems i've read and the second one i've liked. i will even add it to my mypoemlist.

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