Thursday, December 2, 2004

Evening Star Comments

Rating: 4.8

As I stare upon you, Evening Star
From the land where sorrows reign
I envy you, oh star of night
Who never has known pain
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Dee Slater
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Primrose Tee 05 May 2014

twinkle twinkle little star

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Theorem Thetruthserum 01 September 2005

Very good...I like the structured rhyming style that you chose in this poem.

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Timothy Werner 17 February 2005

Very well written poem. To live without sorrow, very good wish.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 07 December 2004

What a wonderfully moving and sad poem. Thank you. H

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Soeul, South Korea
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