Evergreen Heart - 09 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Evergreen Heart - 09

Rating: 5.0


Broken heart keeps on breaking,

Rivers of tears keep a steady flow.

Shards of time and space.

Friday, March 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,eternity,heart song,lifestyle,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
D Priyanka Singh 31 March 2018

Broken heart keeps on breaking, Rivers of tears keep a steady flow. Shards of time and space. Heart like a glass at times feels like the shards of time and space that freeze into ice. Lovely theme. Is it the translation of that tiny Odia poem you wrote years back? I remember. 10+++++++++++++

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Thank you dear DP for these beautiful remarks and the high evaluations.

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D Priyanka Singh 31 March 2018

Broken heart keeps on breaking, Rivers of tears keep a steady flow. Shards of time and space. Heart like a glass at times feels like the shards of time and space that freeze into ice. Lovely theme. Is it the translation of that tiny Odia poem you wrote years back? I remember.

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Thank you dear Priyanka for these beautiful remarks and the high evaluations.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2018

Broken heart cries and river of tear flows. Sadness comes in mind. But love blossoms like flower giving joy...10

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Thank you revered Sir. Thank you for these beautiful remarks and the high evaluations.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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