You Are My Love

Rating: 5.0

Like a crystal of Salt,
You dispersed in me throughout
The moment I met you.

Monday, May 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship,love and dreams
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 07 September 2017

Like a crystal of Salt, You dispersed in me throughout The moment I met you. Beautiful poem. Thanks poet. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 30 September 2017

Thank you dear Sabita for the kind and gracious remarks.

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D Priyanka Singh 11 September 2017

Like a crystal of Salt, You dispersed in me throughout The moment I met you.g rest haiku on deep passionate love. 10++++.

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Lopamudra Kajolika 29 September 2017

Yes Priyanka, I agree, its a rare poem of love.

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Captain Cur 17 March 2021

A tiny grain becomes a pillar of love. Beautiful sentiment perfectly expressed!

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2020

Dissolving love. Nice Haiku.5 stars

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Prativa Rani 05 December 2020

A fantabulous creative effort Sir..love to read it once again.

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Banamala Sen 14 April 2019

Amazing! Would like to see many more of such intensely emotional poetic poems! What an imagery!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2018

I have never come across with such a magnificent Haiku! My great pleasure revisiting it!

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 December 2018

Thanks a million Sir for such warm compliments.

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