Sunday, February 8, 2009

Everywhere I Go... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Carinval.. For some reason, the whole time I've thought of you..
first step in.. its a whole new game.
holding my money standing in line..
for the tickets.. for all the rides..
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Dislocated Heart
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Sunset moonshine 08 February 2009

Aw... so cute... i like it....

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Catrina Heart 08 February 2009

awesome poem written in different theme...a carnival ride..so sweet narration of one's thoughts...10+++

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rohit sapra 08 February 2009

Your poems have a great depth since they reflect sincere emotions.

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