palesa deejay manaleng

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Ex - Factor - Poem by palesa deejay manaleng

You gave him your love
Not realising he lies
Your heart was his
So he played

I look around at the broken
Pieces and pray
Pray to God I can fix them
Sweep them together and hold them in my hands

Hold you tight and dance
Your pain away.


Comments about Ex - Factor by palesa deejay manaleng

  • (5/13/2011 9:16:00 AM)


    Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom.
    Wonderfully written. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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