Ex - Factor Poem by palesa deejay manaleng

Ex - Factor

Rating: 5.0


You gave him your love
Not realising he lies
Your heart was his
So he played

I look around at the broken
Pieces and pray
Pray to God I can fix them
Sweep them together and hold them in my hands

Hold you tight and dance
Your pain away.

Friday, May 13, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: dance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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