Exams Poem by Lauren O Brien

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A fleeting emptiness left,
Accomplishment, the greatest success,
Procrastination is what I do best.
Seeping boredom, Seldom I find
What I truely want, Ease of mind,
Guess work, lead and wait
I am all but ever late.
Dismal dreams and wishes of futile crass
Create nothing more than an improbable impassé.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 18 June 2009

Graet imagery Lauren, excellent write...10+++

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Barbara Sallee 18 June 2009

Lauren, What a beautiful write.Today is my first day on this site so i am a little lost and am not exactly sure how everything works. pleas feel free to leave me comments on my poems good or bad as i feel i learn from established poets like you. Your friend in poetry. Barbie

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