Exhaust Poem by Mike Mendoza

Exhaust

Rating: 5.0


Words and abundance
Red ribbon, how triumphant
Looks like this area's marked
Different after the dark
Low lives with nothing else to do
Desperate to bring something new

Surrounded and there's a lone figure
Bitter, frustration or sweet as sugar
Post paradise to balance on strings
Those lips spill more as your eyes seek him

Still mended with a bit of scuff
Wondering who you were thinking of
A baby begins life. While you end mine with a lie
Magnificent. Magnified. The love. We tried
I'm in the woods. In the chilled
Who's in love? The spoiled or who fell

Friday, January 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: gossip,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 10 September 2016

Great poem of the realities of life. When you have given it your all nothing is left.

0 0 Reply
Weldon Davis 15 January 2016

Loved your poem rated it a 10...My fav line was A baby begins life you end mine with a lie..I can relate to that statement whole heartedly

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success