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Exhausted But Still In Pursuit

Rating: 5.0

Been running for days
never ready to retire
always ahead
the enemies behind
the goal to get
at all cost

Never to quit
rather to continue
though tired

never retires
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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

beautiful insightful write, Micheal...you maintain the 'tempo' of the race and of the scene of 'enemies behind' very effectively all through...despite illusionary wins the race never ends...10

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