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Standing Out

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I will perspire
to acquire
whatsoever i desire
even though i face trial
i will never retire
instead i will refire
until i acquire
that which i desire

I have desired

that where others are sitting
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Ifeyinwa Ezenyimulu 20 August 2007

i love this poem: the rhyme in fact everything

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Poison 9901 12 August 2007

Very nicely done. The play on words, , Perfect Thanks for the read 'Keep on inkin the Pages' Poison

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Max Reif 12 August 2007

This is very clever, and you seem to have a strong will that leads me to believe what you're saying.

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