I gave up all i had
just for me to be heard
but lacked the boldness
to fix the bait to the hook
I tried to open up
but all i could like a broken cup
was to see myself shattered in shamble
as though defeated in a rumbe
She loves some one else
for so i was told or else
i would have been gone
but my love sticks like gum
Fare well to love
good bye my love
as i leave you like a friend
to meet at last like strangers
Why is love so cruel
to have tortured the heart once loved
she may not have noticed
but a murderer having mudered
wow the last stanza really struck me this poem definitely deserves a 10 and don't give up on love! there is someone out there for you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful write that tells the tale of vagaries young hearts have to face in love life...frank and expressive lines well meant nicely framed...10