Extreme Sadness... Poem by Sumita Jetley

Extreme Sadness...

Rating: 5.0


Unease
feeling as if something very precious
has been knocked out

few times are heavy
a log...
they won't pass
before they have weighed down on us

and eased themselves
quietly without having uttered a word


World gone

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 February 2020

A well crafted piece. The message is clear........10++++

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