Emptiness That Seeps In Poem by Sumita Jetley

Meticulous arrangement of things around us gives us satisfaction but it might not be able to forestall the grave impact of emptiness in life seeping through or loneliness. Thanks Sumita ji.

Perfectionism also brings emptiness, especially that perfectionism is never attained without labor and struggle.

The power of brevity speaks here...

A good breading inside the beautiful poem

Very true. Can only do our best and take good with bad.

Emptiness might crawl at times, Still things sound full in their own right. You touch the points of emptiness and fulfillment. love your short poem. tony

Emptiness might crawl at times, Still things sound full in their own right. We all experience Emptiness in our lives.. thank u for such a poem. tony

Emptiness is the root of everything........nice poem

Emptiness might crawl at times, complicated mind and its ways, mind is a mystery, even in the midst of joys you feel empty. thank you for this poem. thank you.. tony