Eye Of The Storm Poem by Robert Roberts

Eye Of The Storm



In the eye of the storm
where the rain clouds let up
past to my back
hope the future clears up

Praying for better days
keep it real in better ways
hope calm weather stays

Future in my eyes
a life when no one dies
and great mind collides
you got to love these time

where the grand ma and grand child sits
and everybody eats
as they reminisces
on the good old days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nurain Ali-balogun 30 September 2012

This is nothing short of extraordinary, bringing together the past, present and future, reminiscing on the past, taking the best out of the present and hoping for the brightest future. Well done.

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Mason Maestro 30 September 2012

Although this piece needs some work, I think it is well written. You'll need to improve the grammar and capitalization, etc... but it can be quite great if promoted. Keep up the good work! If you can, i'm trying to promote and get my work out there and known. I'm about to release my latest conceptual novelty and all twelve pieces are here on this site. They each cover 12 different areas in society that have been infiltrated by the powers that be. A few of them are; The Equation, (Big Banking) Orwellian Youth, (The Family Unit) Justis, (Law) and Each and Every Day (Food) .

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