Eyeball Exploder Poem by Chris Darlington

Eyeball Exploder

Rating: 5.0


My dad worked in a slaughter house
Stale blood on his boots smelled for miles
I thought what a cruel job he had
He was chief eyeball exploder.

For hours I used to watch over him
I sat staring at his eyes,
In case they exploded,
While he slept.

Wednesday, June 22, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: dad,house,staring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 June 2011

Great poem. Written well with vivid imagery. Nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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