I strolled through a green patch
With Slow light feet
Surprised yet calm
Bit by bit
Flowers of all shades
Cherry, lavender, pink
I walked through
And found
Some new kind of trees
an eccentric villa and
shiny bees
around crystal leaves
Taking soft steps
I saw
Some small charming beings (males and females)
Conical hats
multihued scarves
Bouquets in hands
They were
Smaller than the dwarfs
To know more
and see
I sat behind
the tree
From the villa came out
A dazzling fairy
Glittering blue her eyes
Divine were her smiles
White gown, white wings
Magical stick on her side
On head there was
A Silver garland
I was amazed that
She looked (only looked)
Just like my best friend
She came out and sat
On a miniature wooden bench
Around her all dwarfs stood like a fence
They placed there for her
A golden-silver boat
“Come sit dear sweet”
One of them proposed
As she touched it with feet
It turned into a big Ship
Dwarfs danced out of joy and
Sat beside their dear fairy…..
The ship sailed in sky (magical ship)
For quite a long while
As they came back on ground
I saw…
Some of them groaned
With you on this boat
We want to sail more
“We are not mortals
We are not immortal
We are not real
We are not unreal
There exists a world
Where wishes are endless
There exists a planet
Where no one is selfless
We are the magical beings
We don’t belong to that world
Never in our land
We asked for more than we can
Why are you distressed?
I just don’t understand..”
With closed eyes she murmured
some short angelic chants,
“I can smell of a being
I can smell those sands…
I can feel her presence
And Some unusual essence”
“O dear human wherever you are
Listen to me dear
and listen to my
Sweet dwarfs
We do not know what should be
We do not know what should not
We are magical beings we have
Been so happy so far
Let our land remain
Free of
greed, desires and wars
Your presence on our land is
Drifting things apart…
Oh dear human.
I plead..”
her appeals
Were still on..
But,
I opened my eyes
And thought where had I been
Unhappy I was I broke my
Such a beautiful dream
Dear friend, Your poem the style of it is very nice. But please do go on subject of deeper meaning, more than superficial things, observe nature more closely, say minutely and observe the intriciate things happening around and pen with more vivid imageries.
Hi Cherry Interesting subject. Some clever rhymes and thoughts. Please read my poetry - I've only just started uploading so many more to follow. Paul
a melancholy fairytale that is full of reminders to us all.very nice work!
Beautiful, subtle and delicate 'story' as the quiet sweet music who is soothing our hearts. So much a wonderful is in your garden, stopping breath! I am pleased that I could read it. You can in the natural way very much interesting administer your poetry - and we can feel emotions with your heroes.This poem is for me close. It wake up my reflection, associated with my writing and other garden... I am appraising highly (9) for the ability of bringing up 'strings' which a waiting for the touch. It is playing entire living in us. Greetings for you, very warmly :) Maria Barbara Korynt - I am also inviting to comment on my poetry.
an angelic garden and a well meaning dream. Awesome composition with its magical spell. Cherry, Thank you for sharing. CP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ooohh....so lovely, dear.... wish there was a land of all the things u mentioned! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Great! !