Faithless Poem by Diego Adrian Manriquez

Faithless

Rating: 5.0


Close you eyes it's time to pretend
Life feels a lot less sad when you're chillin' with your imaginary friends
Always listening to what you have to say
Never neglecting you, no not a single day
Of pain and misery has covered this place
There was a time where not a needle pierced these vein
This is what helps me escape and kill the pain
Drowning in a sea of worries
I was left to overcome
I was such a coward, I hid from everyone
I've come here to redeem myself but, isolated those I've come to know and love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gabby Elvy 09 October 2011

I Loved It :) It Has a Remarkable Style Vivid Imagery && Its Jus All Around Great I Rate This a 10

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 09 May 2011

I like it. You have described it very well. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. Great write. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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