Thursday, November 6, 2014

Fake Gods And Fake Disciples Comments

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Whenever I walked on Histories,
I broke many mysteries,
Tricks and treacheries,
The only world's miseries,
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Saheb Mohapatra 07 November 2014

the first and last stanza are tremendous...........very strong and nice poem........great work.

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Salini Nair 07 November 2014

Mind is full of hatred, Killing innocent, making earth red A spiteful of revenge, Hiding their evil deeds, Fake gods and fake disciples, ..........................powerful write.....................

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