Just a little drop,
Yet you make me smile,
Soft, cold,
Yet I feel alive.
Stay,
Keep falling,
Trickle down my skin,
I can stand,
Watch forever,
Breathe and let my worries sink.
I really wonder,
I awe,
How do you make me feel myself?
In just a few seconds,
Just a few spells.
And yet you bring me peace,
Your drops, they heal my wounds,
Rain, I owe you life,
So fall,
Fall anew.
Firstly in readable poetry you need imagery to involve me the reader. Secondly, I feel, you need a subject not flogged and seen from a different perspective and lastly if you make the reader want to read it a second time.then you have a successful formula. Miss Padhi you succeed in all of these points. Love this story.Keep writing please.
Thnk u for reading my work and for your encouraging words. They really mean a lot to me. I'll always keep those points in my mind while writing in the future. Thnx again: -) : -D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem is slendid. This a beautiful piece indeed. Keep up the poetic spirit.
Thnx for reading: -D