Thursday, April 26, 2007

Fall Out Of Love Comments

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I beg tears to come
To flow freely from my eyes
Hoping that my burden will be light
Wishing that my pain will be relieved
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Okuola Paul Abiola
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Meggie Gultiano 12 July 2007

Nice piece my dear Okuola! i was touched reading this..

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Olabode Oluwatayo 04 May 2007

an extreme piece! well done! ...

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Elin Askeland 26 April 2007

I really liked this poem...thanx...

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Marvin Brato 26 April 2007

Falling out of love happens because of varied reasons, some noteworthy, others sentimental, many rational, but others are plain crazy. Whatever the reason was, love is lovelier the second time around. This poem is outrageous! .10 for it.

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Madly In Love 26 April 2007

wow this is an amazing poem keep writing

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