Fallen Poem by anais vionet

Fallen

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My last Thursday class is over - my class-week is over.

Looking back at the science building, we'd just left,
the hallway looked dark, like the throat of an animal,
the people snaked out like a tongue, the archway
seemed like a mouth - I shivered and looked away.

Lisa laughed, and my senses returned to reality.

The clouds on high, hung like fresh linens on a line
being dried by the sun in its Egyptian blue heaven.

The air smelled rich, clean and ionized and ever
the inventive stylist, it periodically rearranged my hair.

Leaves rustled, sounding like buzz of conversation,
as they rushed from place to place, as if late to class.

The breeze was working hard, in jerky flourishes,
like the strokes of an indecisive artist.

The afternoon seemed as bright and brash as a shout
as if it wanted, no demanded, our emotional attention
and I gave it, smilingly, ready for the weekend.

Fallen
Thursday, November 9, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,senses
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 10 November 2023

a poet upon whom fall has befallen, about to fall into newly choreographed moments rich with incipience...

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