Dust Poem by anais vionet

Dust

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We are poor creatures
slimy organs imprisoned in flesh.
The sun burns us, water drowns us
our lives are rough and short,
we're little more than talking dust.

We all howl with angry doubts.
Our art may dry and chip
our science could let us down,
our poets stammer and grow quiet.

Humanity has always been imperfect,
but some of us are trying. We see the stars,
we know passion, we sing and dance
and are Indomitable - join us-
because the best is yet to come

Dust
Thursday, June 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: human,dust,future,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

4) the second stanza is all about our weak body. Third stanza speaks about "imperfect" humanity, in both body and soul. But an indomitable spirit, the soul, takes it forward. Science (as we know today) may fail us.

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anais vionet 28 June 2023

OMG, I see your comments.. thank you. I'm reading them now.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

This 'poet', me, does NOT 'stammer', & I'd never be called QUIET. Ask anyone. : )

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

stanza 1: What do YOU consider 'short'? I'd say that the length of MINE right now is just about right! And I'd just as soon not have it become longer. Speaking of long hair, how much glue does it take to keep that rug on your head? bri ;)

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I had posted some notes here. Where have they vanished, PoemHunter?

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anais vionet 28 June 2023

I haven't seen any comments all month - I get notifications that they're here - but they aren't.

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Denis Mair 23 June 2023

Two weight-bearing pendulums improvise a way forward. Muscles flex while bones maintain rigidity, and so we stand erect...

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anais vionet 28 June 2023

Ok

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Denis Mair 23 June 2023

Two kinds of indomitability: 1) singing and dancing; 2) reducing things to dust (by will to know, or by hard-headed logic or maybe a death wish) .

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anais vionet 28 June 2023

I don't have a 'death wish.' I want to be a DR - so, it's a healing wish. But everyBODY dies, alas.

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