When will you listen?
When will you hear?
When will the shell you live in
Finally disappear?
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Oh, I rather enjoyed the tone of your poem, gave it a flowing song sound.
Nice. Thought provoking. Have to read it a couple times to search for (reveal) the deeper message. Enjoyable. Keep on keeping on.
I love the imagery the tone the format....well I could even say it is just as good as Robert Frost. Very well done.