Monday, September 1, 2008

Falling Apart Comments

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my life was once great
things were easy for me and going good
i had a lot to live for
i once had a lot of friends
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Andrew Olson
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Brianna Trombley 18 January 2009

very touching and deep poem, but you do have something to live for and you have so many more years to become something, im sorry you feel this way tho, but getting good grades and playing sports arent everything, i hope maybe one day you find happiness once again

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Sage of Time 04 September 2008

i love this poem i can realate to it its very deep awesome

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Tanya Stanford 02 September 2008

Wow I'm amazed at how dramatic and deep your poems are.

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