Falling In Love Poem by Kieran J1996

Falling In Love

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I dont know what to do,
Im falling in love,
But how do you feel?
When push comes to shove?

Endlessly falling,
Within those eyes,
But telling myself,
Paper thin lies,

I dont know what to do,
About falling in love,
So how do you feel?
When push comes to shove?

I don't know what to do,
Why do I feel this way?
These chaotic emotions,
How to describe it, what to say?

I don't know what to do,
About falling in love,
How do you feel?
When push comes to shove?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Brewer 07 July 2010

This is really nice, has a good flow to it. well done, keep writing! check out any of my poems if u have a minute! thanks xxxx

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Young love.. can be so confusing at times. You portrayed this well in your poem! Good one; D

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ellie carpenter 01 July 2010

love the flow of this poem! love the poem its self keep writing and ill keep reading love it love ya xoxoxo ellie

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