False Promises Poem by Ellia Keil

False Promises

Rating: 3.5


Love that would never end
Love that was loyal
Love that was kind
Love that was truthful
Love that never hurt
Those were your promises to me

Love that killed me
Love that lied
Love that was hateful
Love that cheated
Love that ended
Lies do not become us
So why must you continue to tell me false promises?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My first boyfriend knew I had insecurities and he swore he'd do anything to make me feel safe with him.....naturally he lied....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2013

The poem tells us about how broken promises hurt. The note makes us feel sad.

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Ellia Keil

Ellia Keil

Columbus, Ohio
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