Saturday, April 18, 2015

False Tooth Comments

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I can't tell you how half measures
crowded my life after you left.
Always on the brink of this
or that, if the messages I typed
...
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Mihir Chitre
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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2015

I truly enjoyed reading your poem, Mihir. Well done!

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 April 2015

interesting and well penned poem, Mihir. Your poetic tale flows nicely and gives the reader a clear and honest picture of the feelings involved - Indeed, you have avoided all those mawkishness / sweetish affectations that so often fill love poems.. Really a good poem. Thanks for sharing Fabrizio

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