Family 423 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Family 423

Rating: 4.3


I want to believe in jesus christ, and
learn to fall in his arms, but all i see
is madness, and all the christens
locking their doors, i want to
believe in meracles, filled with
hope and love, but all i see
is tears and shame, from a
father, getting drunk....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ghada Shahbender 03 May 2005

This poem is brilliant. Doubt is human and intelligent and you express it beautifully. Its a step towards belief in anything.

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Allan James Saywell 02 May 2005

HOW ARE YOU DAVID, HOPE YOU ARE WELL THERE IS A COUPLE OF WORDS THAT YOU MIGHT CORRECT SPELLING ERRORS I MAKE THEM ALL THE TIME, THIS POEM IS FROM THE HEART THAT IS ALL THAT MATTERS WELL DONE REGARDS AJS

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David Gerardino 02 May 2005

ok, this poem is a downer.............

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