Monday, December 14, 2015

Family - After Night Shift Comments

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She comes home from night shift after 12 hours
Yelling at the dog and using her grumpy powers
Her shift at the hospital in ICU had been a busy one
Where they struggled for each life in a fight to be won
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Paul Warren
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Kim Barney 14 December 2015

Interesting insight into the life of a nurse. I also have a daughter who is a registered nurse. One little thing you will want to fix: in line five the word you want is LIE instead of LAY. Sorry, I can't help it. I used to be an English teacher.

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