Monday, August 3, 2015

Fantasy Dream Comments

Rating: 4.3

For once in my life I’m
Up, up so high I can touch the sky.
Climbing, excited for what comes next,
Keeping the negative out,
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James Kiser
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Kelly Kurt 03 August 2015

A fantasy of many ordinary people, James. Nice write

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Roseann Shawiak 03 August 2015

Starting out to be so positive and uplifting, then in the last verse saying, Sadly this will never happen to me. Gives me pause for thought, James. Then I realized what the title was, Fantasy Dream. Good one, you has me stymied for a second there. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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